有沒有人可以幫我改一改文法&改通順一點??(英文好的請進)

Dear Amelia,

I am writing to you about my accommodation in Geneva. Could you please assist me in finding a lodging for my internship? Thank you for your time and help.

可以寫得比較詳細及具體一點﹕

例如: 應該加上抵達和離關Geneva的暫定日期，以便對方知道如何作適當安排。假如你對寄宿方面有甚麼特別要求，也要事先說清楚，以免浪費對方時間。

Dear Amelia,
I am writing you this letter to seek your assistance in finding an accommodation for me during my internship here in Geneva. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
Thank You & Best Regards
Tommy

Dear Amelia,
I write to regard about the accommodation during my internship in Geneva. Would you please to assist me finding some information about this. Thank you for your assistance.

Dear Amelia,

I am writing you a letter regarding the accommodation in Geneva. If you could find me an accommodation during my internship, that would be appreciated.

Thank you for your time.

Tommy