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社區中心應該舉辦一些免費的活動,
Community Centres should offer some no-charge activities to the elderly and poor people.

例如:書法班,手工藝班,跳舞班.......
For example: Calligraphy course, Arts and Crafts, Dancing lesson....

市民除了以上的方法,亦應自己幫助一些有需要的人士。
Other than those mentioned above, we should also volunteer ourselves to help the needy people.

The community Centre needs to hold some cost-free activities for the poor people and elderly.For example,calligraphy squad ,craft squad and dance squad,etc.Moreover,citizens should also help the needy apart from that.
(社區中心應該舉辦一些免費的活動,例如:書法班,手工藝班,跳舞班.......市民除了以上的方法,亦應自己幫助一些有需要的人士。)

The community Centre need(S) to hold some cost-free ACTIVITIES for the poor(S) and elderly.Like calligraphy squad,craft squad AND DANCING LESSONS . BESIDES, Citizen can also help THE needS .(社區中心應該舉辦一些免費的活動,例如:書法班,手工藝班,跳舞班.......市民除了以上的方法,亦應自己幫助一些有需要的人士。) ^^

The community Centre need(S) to hold some cost-free ACTIVITIES for the poor(S) and elderly.Like calligraphy squad,craft squad AND DANCING LESSONS . BESIDES, Citizen can also help THE needS .(社區中心應該舉辦一些免費的活動,例如:書法班,手工藝班,跳舞班.......市民除了以上的方法,亦應自己幫助一些有需要的人士。)

The community Centre need to held some free activities for the poor and old people .Like calligraphy squad,craft squad,dance squad......Citizens can also help people who need your hands aside from doing that.