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我paraphrase同埋剪裁左你段野:
The term ‘multiculturalism’ first appeared in the 1960s in order to replace the word “Biculturalism”. Before the 60s, French and English speaking people were the only ones addressed in Canada. Even though there are lots of people in Canada speaking other languages, the rights of the French and English-speaking were the main concern. This ideology has become the primary designator of Canadian society today, without it, we probably wouldn’t see so many different cultures flourish in our country.
Throughout the 1900s, the rights of Natives and non-English speakers were greatly ignored in Canada. Some minorities living in Canada weren’t getting paid the same amount and they were treated differently at work. Finally in 1967, the situation started to improve. Canada became the first country in the world that adopted an multicultural policy. This policy encourages equal rights in the Canadian Society and promotes social harmony. Furthermore, people from different nations of the world are allowed to keep their own nationalities rather than giving them up like in USA.
note: I merged the 3rd paragraph into the first one due the the face that it is a mere a repetition of the first two.
我自己改架, 希望可以幫倒你!!
2007-03-13 17:19:13 補充：
to 3rd user: 沒錯, 我只是重組了句子和剪, 大致上意思同原文相同但發問者只是要求我幫她/他 paraphrase, 並沒有要求我改變這篇文章的意思。
