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I had been to France when I was a kid. France is a very famous place over the world.

First of all, my most favourate spot, the Eiffel Tower. Eiffel Tower is the symbol of Paris as well as it's country. The tower is approximately / around 324m tall. Pubic access is available for tourists to experience the breath-taking view over Paris. It's romantic atmosphere had made the Eiffel Tower, one of the most popular spots for lovers in Paris.

I don't have much memories left for France now, they are mostly from photos and information on programmes. However, I still reckon / see Paris as my dream city.


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I have been to France when I was very young. It is a famous place internationally.

First of all, Eiffel Tower, which is my favourite spot. It is also a symbol of France. Its heigh is 324 meters. Tourists can go up to the top and enjoy the beautiful view. Many lovers enjoy going there due to the romantic atmosphere.
I only have very vague memories of France. I recall the place from photos and programmes, but I still believe France is a dream city of mine!

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i have been to france when i was very small. it's one of the famous place in the world.
first of all, the eiffel tower, which is the spot i like most. it's a symbol of paris in france. its height is 324m. toruists can go up there to enjoy the beautiful view. many lovers like to go there since the atmosphere there is very romantic.
i think i just have very little memory about france. i know there from the photos and programmes but i still treat it as the dream city of mine.

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2007-03-11 22:01:46 補充：
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I have been France when I was very small.It’s a famous place over the world.



I think I just have very little memory of France. I know there from photos and some programme. But I also treat it as a dream city of mine.