幫我改成英文．．．

My name is XXX, and I am 12 years old. I live in Tuen Mum and study at XXX Primary School. Reading novels (books) is one of my favourite interest, since it can improve and explore my knowledge. I hope that there is a chance for me to develop my interest and ability. Thank you!

I am xxx, 12-year-old. I live in tuen mun and study in xxx(name of school). i like to read as reading can enrich my knowledge. i do hope i will get the chance of being here to develop my interests and abilities. thank you.