求職信問題，10分！

2007-03-08 7:50 am

我己經打好左履歷表，想用e-mail，E-mail標題大概係應徵xx，附履歷表，咁附檔就係履歷表啦，咁內容我想打小小野，例如短既求職信，有無人可以幫下我呀！
我中五畢業於 PLK 1983 Board of Director College，工作經驗:
99 – 02 Sales/Waitress
Nov 02 - Mar 04 TaxPro Executive Services Limited (Account Clerk)負責報税
Mar 04 – Aug 05 Hutchison Global Communications (Clerk)負責安排時間安裝寛頻，計糧，data entry
Apr 06 – Mar 07 Lead Young Logistics Limited (Account Clerk)負責出invoice，做statement，收賬，入票等
我仲想寫埋我d優點，eg:有責任心呀，準時呀，學野快呀...用英文可以點寫呀？唔該幫幫手！十萬分感激！thx

回答 (1)

2007-03-08 9:58 pm

✔ 最佳答案

education 你已經打左係 CV (right?), 唔應該係 letter body再講, 除非係攞十優, 或者有d領袖生既資格, 又同份工 relevant既, 咁先講.

"我仲想寫埋我d優點，eg:有責任心呀，準時呀，學野快呀."
呢d, 應該係 CV 到加一項叫
Strength:
Strong sense of responsibility
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"準時" 唔好提, 大佬呢個係基本做人要求, 唔係優點; 你寫左, 會比人覺得你既價值觀有問題.

good luck

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