英文交法再三問~~=.="

Yes. "being deeply concerned " is subjective. i.e. 被動語太

other ways to structure the sentence i..e. non-subjective

-The fate of man is deeply concerning the scientists, their warning is by no means alarmist.

The fate of man is deeply concerning the scientists, their warning is by no means alarmist. concerning 不是令人擔心，是錯的。disturbing 才是。

"The scientists being deeply concerned with the fate of man, their warning is by no means alarmist."

-The fate of humanity is deeply concerning the scientists, their warning is by no means as a false alarm.


-I changed the word from man to humanity, since some people don't like the sexist writing style.

"their warning is by no means alarmist."

-This sentence doesn't make sense.
Not sure what you mean by there, so I just took a guess on what you try to write.

其實再問也沒有問題
不過，下次可否不要再寫"英文'交'法"呀！
thank you！