Pls help me proof read this sentence, thx!

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用戶156615

2007-03-04 9:43 pm

請看看以下這個句字有沒有問題, 特別是 emigration這個字用得對不對?

I was born in Tai Wan. And I have got several chances to volunteer for different social services in Tai Wan since my emigration to Hong Kong in 2003.

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更新1:

謝謝 PUIMANSIT, 其實, 我想表逹 : 「我在台灣出生。而我移居香港後亦曾幾次到台灣進行義工服務。」應該如可寫呢??

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立基

2007-03-04 9:58 pm

✔ 最佳答案

"I was born in Tai Wan. Before emigrating to Hong Kong in 2003, I have volunteered for several social services in Tai Wan.

I think your services were not done in Hong Kong, so you should not us "since".

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Jenny

2007-03-04 9:54 pm

Try changing it to:

I was born in Taiwan. Before I emigrate to Hong Kong in 2003, I have several chances in Taiwan to volunteer for different social service.

參考: me!

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