I was born in Tai Wan. And I have got several chances to volunteer for different social services in Tai Wan since my emigration to Hong Kong in 2003.
謝謝各位!
更新1:
謝謝 PUIMANSIT, 其實, 我想表逹 : 「我在台灣出生。而我移居香港後亦曾幾次到台灣進行義工服務。」 應該如可寫呢??
Pls help me proof read this sentence, thx!
2007-03-04 9:43 pm
請看看以下這個句字有沒有問題, 特別是 emigration這個字用得對不對?
I was born in Tai Wan. And I have got several chances to volunteer for different social services in Tai Wan since my emigration to Hong Kong in 2003.
謝謝各位!
I was born in Tai Wan. And I have got several chances to volunteer for different social services in Tai Wan since my emigration to Hong Kong in 2003.
謝謝各位!
回答 (2)
2007-03-04 9:58 pm
✔ 最佳答案
"I was born in Tai Wan. Before emigrating to Hong Kong in 2003, I have volunteered for several social services in Tai Wan.I think your services were not done in Hong Kong, so you should not us "since".
2007-03-04 9:54 pm
Try changing it to:
I was born in Taiwan. Before I emigrate to Hong Kong in 2003, I have several chances in Taiwan to volunteer for different social service.
I was born in Taiwan. Before I emigrate to Hong Kong in 2003, I have several chances in Taiwan to volunteer for different social service.
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