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28th February,2007 Wednesday
I was very surprised today because I have got an invite card fron Daisy. We haven't contact for five years. She invited me to join her birthday party.This made me very happy!
Because of this appointment, I dressed specially on that day. I hope that I could get Daisy's attention. Oh, It's time for me to proceed to her home!
When I got there, I saw many old friend,like:Kitty,Lily,Alice,Kelvin etc.I was so happy!
Then, we started to cut the cake,sing birthday song,play games. Also, we had exchange our e-mail address too.So that we could contact later.
I was so happy because I can meet my old friends by Daisy's birthday party.Thank you,Daisy.

要注意的是, Diary 係要用 past tense的....希望幫到你LA^^

2007-03-03 19:02:56 補充：
補充:haven't contacted

2007-03-03 19:04:17 補充：
I could meet my old friends

I don't know why you picked this as the Best Answer, there's lots of grammatical mistakes. Even the Other Answer is better than this one.

28th February,2007(Wednesday)
I was very surprised today because I got an invitation card from Daisy, whom I haven't seen for five years . She invited me to her birthday party . This made me very happy !
I dressed up for the occassion . I hope that my dress-up could grab Daisy' s attention .
Time' s up ! I was required to proceed to her home . After reaching there, I was so happy that I could see a lot of my old friends, like Kitty,Lily,Alice, Kelvin, etc .
Soon after, we all cut the birthday cake , sang the song "Happy birthday to Daisy" and played games . After the party, we all exchanged our e-mail addresses , which are used for our contacts in the future .
I was so happy because I could meet many of my old friends in the Daisy' s birthday party . Thank you , Daisy .

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