英文作文問題 請指教

Grammar，極其量只不過是對詞性的瞭解。Grammar正確，不等如英文正確。I cut a loaf of bread同 I killed a loaf of bread也是grammar上正確，不過一眼可以看出有甚麼問題；不是grammar，而是usage和vocab的誤用。

我覺得你的問題不是grammar，而是這句：{我較喜歡用自己的文字表達自己的想法}，在外語初學者來說是大忌。尤其對外國人來說，這類誤用只會令他們迷失。

作文之前，用一點功夫了解老師的句形，然後決定在文中使用一兩次。其次，作一些生字的功課，找四至五個對題目有關的字，查查字典，看看有沒有方法可以找出其他講法。加大vocab和句形的記憶。

創作寫作沒有問題，但未清楚遊戲規則就自創新規就可能有點那個。平時作文時多當練習，我相信下次你會有好表現的。

我提議問題在你讀書不夠, 你可以從書中學會多D正確的Grammer.最緊要creative,但不要太誇張, 要make sense. 讀書多D, 寫文vocab 會容易想到.
Interesting但不要太複雜,
e.g.:The girl who is a wearing colourful blouse and a beautiful skirt is Mary, she is my sister.太複雜! e.g.:My sister, Mary is the girl who is wearing a charming outfit. 簡單好多! Vocab 又多.
字最好唔好重複, e.g.: say/said 可以有多D變化: exclaimed, shierked, countered, muttered, murmured, whispered, hissed, mentioned, graoned etc.

我認為你的問題是自己温習grammar的時間太少，
我建議你開一本新簿，每天把字典裏的例句抄在
那本薄上，那你認識的句子結構就會愈來愈多，
成績自然就會變好！！

其實你應該用返d例句
老師俾你地抄
其實係想你用熟d例句

同埋有d句子係公式化左
例如寫信
i look forward to hearing from you soon
如果你寫做 i want to receive your reply as soon as possible
咁就會好怪

Instead, your teacher is 英國人. The marking style is not the same as Chinese. Usually, the sentense that copied has a specific style. Although your grammer is good, you make it up yourself. The style is not like the story or example. Therefore, this may happens.

If you want to get higher marks, yuo should read more books and copied down some good sentense. You don't need to copy the whole sentense but try to use the structure to do your composition.

In 作文的考試, you said your result is not good. I think the main problem is the composition you do is no interesting and the content is not rich. Therefore, think of more ideas and that's may help you.

Hope I can help you!!