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Dear Berry,
During the Chinese New Year holiday,I went to mainland with my parent and my grandmother. We were bringing many present to our relatives. It was heavy. Because of the way is far and we were take the bus a long time, so I think that is very tried. But in mainland, I was happy because there is many things to play. We can see the lion dance. At night, we can play the firework. It is interesting. I also to gamble with my cousin, I win a lot. It was happy. We also eat lot of food, like turnip cakes, New Year cakes and deep fried dumplings. I get lots lucky money!
Yours,(name)

Dear Berry,
During the Chinese New Year holiday,I went to mainland with my parent and my grandmother. We were bringing many present to our relatives. It was heavy. Because of the way is far and we were take the bus a long time, so I think that is very tried. But in mainland, I was happy because there is many things to play. We can see the lion dance. At night, we can play the firework. It is interesting. I also to gamble with my cousin, I win a lot. It was happy. We also eat lot of food, like turnip cakes, New Year cakes and deep fried dumplings. I get lots lucky money!
Yours,(name)