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Good morning/afternoon, everyone. Today I would like to introduce my favourite teacher to you. He/She is Mr/Ms/Mrs XXX(以下假設你老師叫Miss Chan,教你英文). Miss Chan is my English teacher. I like her because she is full of wisdom(智慧), and is able to answer all my questions. My English results improved a lot this year, thanks to her substantial(內容充實的,有價值的,重要的) and meaningful lessons.
Miss Chan does not only care for us during her lessons, but every moment. She is always there to help us and share our sad feelings. I always feel a sense of warmth(溫暖) when I am talking with her. She is so nice and that's the best thing I like about her. I also hope to do better in the future and not disappoint(使人失望) her.
This is the end of my presentation. Thank you fou your attention.
2007-03-02 21:57:02 補充:
下面嗰位你其身不正喎!你點幫人呀?首先,你連sometimes都串錯,之後又錯grammar。Like之後應該用attending,唔係attend。另外,你如果想講話呢個老師係你遇過咁多個老師之中最好,就應該用the,唔係用a。成句應該改成:He/She is THE best teacher I have ever had.
2007-03-02 21:59:10 補充:
另外嚴肅你都串錯,正確串法應該係SOLEMN!我英文攞過Subject Prize。
2007-03-02 22:46:15 補充:
下面嗰位:我覺得唔係啱同錯的問題,而係對知識嗰個追求。我哋應該向住正確方向走,我唔係有心串你,只係想指出你出錯的地方,如果你認為我的回答中有任何地方係有唔啱你咪出聲囉,唔使咁勞氣。如果我有咩係冒犯到你的話,我願意在此致歉。