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2007-03-03 3:44 am
When the elders swoon while having the meals, the staff will call the nurses immediately, and they will check the reasons. If the elders swoon and fall on the floor, the nurses will check if the happening of fracture, we will not move the bodies, and evacuate the masses, thus keeping the air cleaner, and making the emergency rescue smooth. Lastly, we will consider whether send the elders to the hospital.

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2007-03-03 5:38 am
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When the  elderly  swoon while having (the) meals, (the) staff will call (the) nurses immediately, and they will  find out why.  If  the  elderly swoon and fall on the floor, (the) nurses will check if the happening of fracture, they will not move their bodies but evacuate the masses to keep the  environment well ventilated  and  make  the emergency rescue smooth. Lastly,  they  will consider whether they will send the  elderly  to the hospital.


1.如果你用the elders想指老人家就要用 the elderly / old people
用them黎代替,如果上文指過。

2.我將the括晒係因為當你唔特別指明某一樣野/人就唔好加the,用眾數就可以。
   (除非你o係文章前部份有提過就可以加番the )

3.find out why (they swoon)/ find out wha's wrong with them......(仲有好多唔同寫法)
好過check the reasons,因為個原因仲未明

4.想講當有人暈左,要保持四周空氣流通用改正左果句好小小^^

5.whether sned 錯grammar ,你仲可以改成whether it is necessay to send them to the hospital , 好多好多寫法



* the elderly 係集合名詞 (collective noun),指既人所有老人,文章開頭即刻寫 The elderly.........都無問題。其他例子仲有 the rich, the poor....等等

2007-03-02 21:42:34 補充:
中間我刪左你d " we " 因為睇番你篇文章,你想指既係 nurses 


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