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My suggestion:
While I was studying the diploma course, I had six months' practical experience taking up system administration work in different secondary and primary schools.


Further elaboration:
1. You study a course, not study a diploma. You can also take a course.

2. If you had been a system administrator, you can say that you "had six months' practical experience serving as system administrator in..."

3. You can use 'various ' to replace 'different ', or omit them and just say ' in secondary and primary schools'.

Hope it helps!

Totally agree with Ai-opener!!!!

Good answer.

I would like to ask the above answers, do you know you are supposed to help the questioner??

Myself am studying diploma period, has had six month-long practices experiences, once has held the post of system in the different elementary and middle schools the administration work

While studying in diplomaI, I have six months practical experience of system administration in varies primary and secondary schools.

Oneself Be fixing the study diploma period , have the six work experience.once the secondry and primas allows thesystem.Also have administration work in the dissimilarity .

I have six months practice experience when i was studying diploma. Also, I have been a system administrator in many different schools.

During my study for the diploma, I had a six-month work experience of System Administration in several high schools and primary schools.