唔該可唔可以幫我改一改做英文呀

2007-03-01 8:57 am
好 今天終於知道
世上再找不到天荒地老

承諾未兌現

只有你才知道 愛情美麗符號
覺得勇敢的情話最動人

猜不透是哪裡出了錯

熱愛不等於會相擁侶伴走到永久
都只怪 最初識錯你賣相
就算修補得到始終也是一個缺口

一輩子不放手

離開請你早
傷心一輩子來問你怎彌補
簡單的快樂都不歸於我
能令我明白到誰是錯蠢人是我

愛我不能開玩笑

我不想對自己不好

話我知 該繼續呆等嗎

你這秒在哪裡 我都不清楚 你有事暪住我

人會變 情會厭 從沒甚麼保險

哪個為舊人哭 太笨了

回答 (3)

2007-03-01 9:50 pm
✔ 最佳答案
I finally know today
that there is no forever love in this world

promises unfulfilled

there is only you who know ; the beautiful symbol of love
and feel that courageos love vows are the most touching

i do not understand what is wrong

true love does not equal to walking with your lover till the end
now realising that your face is just a mask
even if you can mend it, it is still a crack

won't let go no matter what

if u leave, leave early
heart broken forever, how can you mend it?
simple happiness does not belong to me
i now understand all the fault is in stupid me

loving me is no joke

i dont want to hurt myself

tell me do i still wait?

where are u now this second i don't even know you are hiding something from me

people change tired of love there is no safety/insurance

a person who cry for a lover before is too silly
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2007-03-02 9:35 am
好 今天終於知道
Fine Today I finally know
世上再找不到天荒地老
In this world, I would never find such a poor situation any more

承諾未兌現
Promise is not negotiated yet

只有你才知道 愛情美麗符號
You are the only one who knows the pretty symbols of love
覺得勇敢的情話最動人
brave whispers of love are the most appealing

猜不透是哪裡出了錯
Can't find out where did go wrong

熱愛不等於會相擁侶伴走到永久
the fervent love doesn't mean you can with your companion forever
都只怪 最初識錯你賣相
I can just blame I didn't really recognize your specious look
就算修補得到始終也是一個缺口
Even though it could be mended, it would still have a hiatus

一輩子不放手
I would never let you go

離開請你早
If you have to leave, please leave early
傷心一輩子來問你怎彌補
How could you retrieve my forever sadness
簡單的快樂都不歸於我
Simple happy can not owned by me
能令我明白到誰是錯蠢人是我
It can intract me to understand who's fault is it the blockhead is me

愛我不能開玩笑
Love me can not be a joke

我不想對自己不好
I don't want to treat myself badly

話我知 該繼續呆等嗎
Please tell me should I continue my waiting ?

你這秒在哪裡 我都不清楚 你有事暪住我
I am not sure where are you right now at this second You have something that you don't want to tell me

人會變 情會厭 從沒甚麼保險
People would change sentiment would detest

哪個為舊人哭 太笨了
who cries for his/her old lover is too dull
2007-03-01 9:12 am
請先改好你的中文吧

那不是改一改做英文, 而是將你的吾知什麼意思,不知句定詩,

重新作做英文, 超高難度,


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