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1.if the computer is down, we can use paper and pens.

2.if you want to get good results, you must work hard.

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1. if the computer is down, we can use paper and pens.

2. you must work hard if you want to get good results.

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1.if the computer is broke down, we will use the papers and pens.

2.you will get good results if you can work hard.