可以幫忙批改我的英文文章嗎???

但係偏文都錯左Grammar喎...
應該係:
If five stars represent the full mark, The 'Finding Nemo' will undoubtedly get five stars,It is because the 'Finding Nemo' is really a perfect film. The 'Finding Nemo' quits using the relationship between mother and daughter and shifts to the relationship between father and son, it can be effective. The 'Finding Nemo' can also communicate a positive and optimistic message to us, it's really suitable for everyone!!
中文:
如果5粒星伐表滿分,那《海底奇兵》無疑會得到5粒星.這是因為這齣電影就是一齣完美的電影.《海底奇兵》放棄了取材於母女之情,而改取較冷門的父子之情,使效果很突出.另外,這齣電影更傳遞給我們正面和樂觀的訊息,真是一齣老少咸宜的電影啊!

2007-02-25 23:58:32 補充：
quits using the relationship between mother and daughter and shifts to the relationship between father and son, 應該係quits using the relationship between mother and daughter 'but' shifts to the relationship between father and son,

Finding Nemo deserves five stars out of five: it is a perfect movie. Finding Nemo is inoovative, as it turns away from the more common theme describing motherly love and presents the story from the view of a father. Such execution has a spectacular effect. Finding Nemo communicates positive and optimistic messages, which will definitely be welcomed by all of us.

英文中的五粒星星滿分，就有五粒的寫法是：
Five stars out of five.
Four and a half stars out of five. 四粒半