I always think my compose is not good enough but finallyi could write a one song which was special and melodious!
其實前一句係表達現在既想法,後者則講緊琴日作既歌
所以文法上應該點表達???可唔可以咁寫?
想問下呢句tense岩唔岩?
2007-02-24 8:51 pm
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2007-02-24 9:32 pm
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I've always thought that my composing skills were not good at all, but I finally wrote a song that was speical and melodious!感樣會流暢D...
2007-02-24 9:08 pm
其實兩句唔應該擺埋一齊....... 唔應該用but黎做conjunction.....
I wrote a special and melodious song, which I feel so impressed as I thought my composition is not good enough.
I wrote a special and melodious song, which I feel so impressed as I thought my composition is not good enough.
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