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If I can have three [[WISHES]] come true. [[THREE OF MY WISHES]] are everyone [[WILL]] have good life. However I think this wish [[WILL]] not come true. If I have [[MY OWN]] dream I must work hard for my dream. Some people [[ARE]] always [[DAYDREAMING]]. For example, some students want [[TO]] get high MARKS]] in [[THEIR]] [[EXAMS]] but they do not work hard [[AND]] only daydream. So they can not get high [[MARKS]]. [[THESE CASES]] tell [[US]] [[THAT]] we don’t have free lunch we must to work hard for our dreams [[AND NOT ONLY]] daydreaming.

If I can have three WISHES come true. My three WISHES all are everyone HAS good life.However I think this wish can not come true. If I have dream I must work hard for my dream. Some people always daydream.For example, some students want TO get high mark in exam but they don't work hard.THEY JUST ONLY DAYDREAM. So they can not get high mark. This story tells me THAT we don't have free lunch, we must work hard for our dreams AND DON'T DAYDREAM.

If I have three wish come true, my three wish will all are everyone have good life.However, I think this wish cannot come ture. If I have dream ,I must workhard for my dream. Somepeople always daydream. For example, some students want to get high mark in exam but they do not workhard only daydreaming. So they cannot get high mark. This story told me we don't have free lunch. We must
workhard for our dreams not daydream.

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If I can have three ( WISHES ) come true. My three ( WISHES ) all ( IS ) everyone
( HAVING ) good life. However I think this wish can not come true. If I have dream I must work hard for my dream. Some people always daydream. For example, some students want get high mark in exam but they ( DON'T ) work hard only daydream. So they
( CANNOT/CAN'T ) get high ( MARKS ). This story tell me we don't have free lunch we must ( X ) work hard for our dreams ( BUT ) not daydreaming.