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2007-02-23 9:24 pm
If you have Sense of responsibility, what advantages do you have?
You will promotion because you have Sense of responsibility and you always on duty on time. You will get high marks in you exam because you are hardworking .So ,why Sense of responsibility is important? Because it can affect your future! If everyone don’t have Sense of responsibility, what will happen? The police won’t arrest the thief. The fireman won’t Fire fighting .The doctor won’t save the invalid. What will the world be?

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2007-02-23 9:49 pm
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What advantages will you have if you have a sense of responsibility?
You will get promoted in your job because of your sense of responsibility and your punctuality. You will get high marks in examinations due to your hard work. As a conclusion, why a sense of responsibility is important? It is because it can change your course of future! If everyone does not have a sense of responsibility, what will happen? For example, policemen will never catch the thieves, firemen will never put out fires and the doctors will never save the patients’ lives. What will this world be if everyone has no sense of responsibility?
2007-02-23 10:33 pm
If you have Sense of responsibility, what advantages do you have?
You will promotion because you have Sense of responsibility and you always on duty on time. You will get high marks in you exam because you are hardworking .So, why Sense of responsibility is important? Because it can affect your future! If everyone doesn’t have Sense of responsibility, what will happen? The police won’t arrest the thief. The fireman won’t Fire fighting .The doctor won’t save the invalid. What will the world be?
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2007-02-23 9:31 pm
If you have a sense of responsibility, what advantages would you have?
You will get promoted, because if you have a sense of responsibility, you always report duty on time. You will get high marks in your examination because you work hard. So why is the sense of responsibility important? Because it can affect your future! If nobody had a sense of responsibility, what would happen? Police wouldn't catch thieves. Firemen wouldn't put out fires. Doctors wouldn't cure the sick. What would the world become?


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