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In the New Year, my father and I went to Flower Market. Many people bought something in the market to celebrate New Year, but I only bought toys. I saw a stall selling pocket monster which I found very interesting. I decided to buy it and I saw another other stall which sold flowers, balloons and take away food. My father bought some flowers and some food for the New Year. At midnight, the big screen had programs of New Year with songs but I am very tired already.

2007-02-20 17:40:32 補充：
My father and I went home by MTR.The first sentence should be "On New Year's Eve". Does that make sense? You went to the market before the clock turned to 12 o'clock.

On New Year's Eve, my father and I went to the Flower Market. Many people bought something in the market to celebrate the New Year, but I only bought some toys. I saw a stall selling pocket monsters which I found very interesting. I decided to buy it and I saw other stalls which sold flowers, balloons and took-away food. My father bought some flowers and some food for the New Year. At midnight, the big screen showed some programs of the New Year with songs but I have been very tired already.