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Here's the correction of the sentence:
Do you have a sense of responsibility? ( article is needed for the thing that appears at first)
Have you ever been late for school? ( no pronoun is needed for the general matter)
Have you ever forgotten to finish your homework? (present perfect tense and duplicate meaning)
It is because you are lack of sense of responsiblity. You don't think you need to take the burden that belongs to you. (chinese english)
The sense of responsibility is a promise of a person who knows what he/she should commit to do. (the sense of responsibility is not equal to a person)
If he/she had a sense of responsibility, he/she would know what to do.

Do you have the sense of responsibility?
Have you ever been late for school?
Have you ever forgotten to finish your homework?
All these are your responsibilities.
But why are you always late, or forget to do something?
It is because you lack the sense of responsibility.
So you don't think you should bear your own burden.
The sense of responsibility is a concept owned by a person, by which he
knows what he should do.
If he has the sense of responsibility, he will know what he should do and
finish his work.

Do you have sense of responsibility? Have you ever been late for your school?
Have you ever forgot to finish your homework at home? Those all your responsibilities! However why are you always be late or forgot to do somethings? It is because you are empty of sense of responsibility. Therefore you don’t think you need to finish your burdens.The sense of responsibility is a person can know what he/she should do．If he has sense of responsibility, he will know what he should do and finish his work.

Do you have the sense of responsibility? Have you ever been late for school? Have you ever forgotten to finish your homework at homw? Those are your responsibilities! But why do you always be late or forget to do something? It is because you don't have the sense of responsibility, thus you always forget to finish your jobs.

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