Please, correct my English sentence

Actually, there are some words that are not necessary.

It can be better written if it is as follows:-

A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel due to the fire accident happened earlier. This might affect* the on scene traffic.

*affect should be used instead of "effect".


Hope I can help u la~~!! ^^

Owing to a fire accident, a southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel. This may affect the traffice on site/the on-site traffic .

A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel because there' s a fire accident . This may affect the traffic on site/the on-site traffic .

A southbound train, due to a fire accident, has stopped inside the tunnel . This may affect the traffic on site/the on-site traffic .

A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel due to the fire accident happened.
This might affect the traffic on site.

'On the scene traffic' 可解作「現場的交通」，應以'the traffic on site'表達。

A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel due to the fire accident happened earlier. This might affect the scene traffic.

A southbound train has stopped inside in the tunnel; due to accident of on fire happened this might be effected on the traffic of scene
on 唔要

2007-02-15 21:50:10 補充：
effect 改成affect