Please, correct my English sentence
2007-02-16 5:37 am
A southbound train has stopped inside in the tunnel; due to on fire accident happened this might be effected on the scene traffic
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2007-02-16 5:48 am
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Actually, there are some words that are not necessary.It can be better written if it is as follows:-
A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel due to the fire accident happened earlier. This might affect* the on scene traffic.
*affect should be used instead of "effect".
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2007-02-20 5:54 am
Owing to a fire accident, a southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel. This may affect the traffice on site/the on-site traffic .
A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel because there' s a fire accident . This may affect the traffic on site/the on-site traffic .
A southbound train, due to a fire accident, has stopped inside the tunnel . This may affect the traffic on site/the on-site traffic .
A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel because there' s a fire accident . This may affect the traffic on site/the on-site traffic .
A southbound train, due to a fire accident, has stopped inside the tunnel . This may affect the traffic on site/the on-site traffic .
2007-02-16 12:37 pm
A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel due to the fire accident happened.
This might affect the traffic on site.
'On the scene traffic' 可解作「現場的交通」，應以'the traffic on site'表達。
This might affect the traffic on site.
'On the scene traffic' 可解作「現場的交通」，應以'the traffic on site'表達。
2007-02-16 7:23 am
A southbound train has stopped inside the tunnel due to the fire accident happened earlier. This might affect the scene traffic.
2007-02-16 5:48 am
A southbound train has stopped inside in the tunnel; due to accident of on fire happened this might be effected on the traffic of scene
on 唔要
2007-02-15 21:50:10 補充：
effect 改成affect
on 唔要
2007-02-15 21:50:10 補充：
effect 改成affect
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