寫一篇英文book review.....十萬火急

Good afternoon teacher and fellow classmates .I am .Today I am going to introduce a book call Daddy-long-Legs .This book is talking about 76 correspondence writing a section of love fairy tale.
Judy is from the orphanage coarsening, she is not respected slightly, nobody is also take pity onto her. Because of an article, Judy uses an alias Smith's mystical rich trustee to help raises, leaves the orphanage, starts four years college life In four year college lives, Judy posted out the innumerable letter to Smith, but never received any replies from him, writing letter is the important channel to communicate with Smith, from reporting the routine business type turns to express her feeling. Down to Judy taking advantage of the writing and the interesting illustration, occurred in a side incident thing, to her wickedly friend, individual happiness and the sadness, interesting on “long leg uncle” and on says vividly to this position. But Judy is optimistic, creative, with sense of humor, also secretly is fallen in love with Smith this small angel, Judy decided to become the sweetheart by hers protector .
I think this story makes me touching .This is the end of my presentation .Thank you.
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Good afternoon teacher and fellow classmates .I am xxx.Today I am going to introduce a book call Daddy-long-Legs .This book is about 76 correspondence write a section of love fairy tale .
Judy from in the orphanage coarsening, she is not respected slightly , nobody is also take pity on to her. Because of an article, Judy uses an alias Smith's mystical rich merchant to help raises, leaves the orphanage, starts four year university life - - condition is Judy must fixed time write a letter for strange Mr. Smith, reported own recent situation, and must endure Smith ever not to reply in writing “the bad custom”.
In four year university lives, Judy mails out the innumerable not any replies to Smith the letter; writes a letter reported from the routine business type that, turns expresses the feeling the important channel. Down to Judy taking advantage of the writing and the interesting illustration, occurs in a side incident thing, to the friend the love wicked, individual happiness and the sadness, interesting “long leg uncle” on and on says vividly to this position. But Judy optimistic, creativity, with sense of humor, also secretly is fallen in love Smith this small angel, decided becomes the sweetheart by hers protector .
I think this story makes me touching ,because we are very lucky to have a family. This is the end of my presentation .Thank you .
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The Five People You Meet in Heaven is a novel by Mitch Albom, published in 2003.

Eddie, the main character is the maintenance man at the amusement park nearby, called Ruby Pier. Eddie had desired to study engineering in life, however, he was never able to leave the pier due to the war, World War 2, and his injury during the war. He continued to work there despite his wishes. On his 83rd birthday, he continues his daily routine of checking rides, fixing parts and other jobs of the sort. The last few minutes of his life are concerned with a broken cart on "Freddy's Free Fall", a tower drop ride, that was hanging at the top. A cable had gotten loose inside of it. He saw this and ran toward the accident but the cart had already start to fall. He saw the girl that he had made a pipe cleaner for earlier on under the cart. He dives to the girl as the cart is reaching the bottom and feels two small hands in his. As he does this, he dies without knowing the outcome of the girl. Then, Eddie continues on in an afterlife and meets five people from his life that changed it greatly in some way. He also continues to ask all five people whether or not he saved the little girl getting no response until the end. Eddie runs into "The Blue Man", a performer in the freak show during Eddie's boyhood who's skin became blue because he took silver natrate, a poison, as medicine. Eddie "kills" the blue man indirectly by chasing after a ball in the street and causing the "Blue Man" to get into a car accident and suffer a heart attack not necessarily from the accident, but also from long term damage to his heart from the silver nitrate. The heart attack causes the blue man to die. He then meets the Captain, Eddie's commanding officer during World War II, who is the main reason for crippling him, but also saving him from a fire and a land mine that the Captain stepped on. He later meets Ruby, the lady after whom the pier was named, Marguerite, Eddie's wife and Tala, a young girl who Eddie unintentionally killed in a fire during the war. Each of these people had their life impacted both in good and bad ways, and they, in turn, impacted Eddie's life. Eddie learns five lessons from them, forgives his father, who he'd always thought of as a coward and a drunkard, and is then welcomed into his heaven: the way Ruby Pier was when he met Marguerite, to wait for the girl he saved as one of her five people in heaven.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_five_people_you_meet_in_heaven

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