英文 commas 既問題!!!!!!!! 快d入來幫手ar!!!!!!!!!! 20分

可以用的d 連接詞例如which, that, 也可把詞字調次序

1. As Hong Kong is a free trade city adopting low tax policy, it lead to tremendous foreign investors into Hong Kong to do busniness

2. Such a tiny city like Hong Kong could actually contain about 700,000 people, making it seems to be a tinned sardine fish.

3. With keen competiton from local and foreign copmanies, selling substandard good or charging at an unreasonably high price is probably an insensible decision for companies.

我或者可以試下唔用comma幫你重寫。好多時，我地加多左comma是有三個原因：Descriptive course可以貼住個noun而我地冇咁做；用倒寫的方法把descriptive course 1 和 2 掉轉，以達到比較華麗的句形，一兩下係可以，用得太多睇到人好累；太多閒字或重覆的字。

Hong Kong supports free trade with low tax policy that attracts tremendous foreign commercial investments.
[which leads to 可以用attracts代；Hong Kong去attract，咁當然係來番HK啦，第二個Hong Kong可以去掉。]

Hong Kong would probably remind you of canned sardine fish with a whopping population of 7,000,000 living in an area of 1,092 squared kilometers.
[香港有七百萬人，唔係七十萬。另外如果你真係想話人知有幾細，比埋個面積會好D。呢句我沒有用你的Subject reason result 句形，用了subject result reason，因為我覺得沙甸魚比較有趣，所以先放前面。canned或tinned沒有錯對，視乎你係英(tin)或美(can)。]

Fierce and yet rational competitions between local and foreign companies have characterized the local retail market with low marginal return and appealing quality of the products.
[第三句有太多反向思考，負面相反詞在英語中通常比較長，也比較轉折，少用為佳。我用了Econ的名詞 low marginal return去代替unreasonably high price，如果想保留你的用句，我會寫：]
Facing such a keen competition, local and foreign companies have to make sensible decisions such as providing products with high quality with reasonable price.