找人幫我作篇文.....很急的...(20分)

對不起!如果你係澳門人的話,我只能幫你這些!但如果你係香港人的話,我幫唔到你啦.對不起!希望能夠幫到你啦!!!

在2006年,我在觀音像舉行了公益金百萬行.首先,我們從觀音像開始出發,路途,我們看到鏡平中學和粵華中學管樂團在表演,但我覺得粵華中學管樂團(有我份表演!!!^o^)是表演得最好的!所以我們大聲喧嘩和拍手鼓勵他們!之後,我們見到澳門的觀光塔是多麼雄偉(99)啊!跟著,我們經過了一間警察局,那裡有很多偉大的警察!最後,我終於到達了目的地,那就是澳門有名的媽閣廟!
在這次活動中,我覺得好開心!我學到了怎樣去鼓勵別人!!!

*如果有咩問題,可以向我發問!!!

2007-02-11 20:24:29 補充：
In 2006, I look like and hold a million lines in Goddess of Mercy.Finally, I reached the destination at last, that was the pavilion temple mother!

"Walk for millions" is a fund raising activity organized by the Hong Kong Community Chest. It has the longest history among all charity's fund raising events in Hong Kong. Since 1971, there are 150 walks organized, estimated 2.8 million participation, over 480 million dollar fund. Over 35 years, still, it is the most popular charity event.

This year, 2006/2007, the HKCC should commit a vision - ' Teach now for the future ', which is to provide a better environment for the growth of youngsters. In order to improve after school care, student counsellings, outdoor training, discipline training and recreational services, not only the HKCC will fund its 21 member charity organizations of 'Children and Youth Services ' with $14 million, but also all raised fund from this year's "Walk for millions”.

There are two routes this year, the Kowloon-Hong Kong route, and the New Territory route. Which one will you join?

2007-02-19 13:36:18 補充：
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