我想呢句同;....but children lose some of their innocence and security;
作一對稱的譯法....
innocence and security同innocent and secure點先可以對稱?
有咩好意見ar~~
million thanks!
更新1:
life is innocent and secure.係段首的第一句,而;....but children lose some of their innocence and security.呢句則係段尾的結句 我老師話......呢個係英文寫作的手法之一... 譯ge時候要用番相對的詞彙,,,,,做成一個對等ge效果.....
