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Hong kong have many festival, for example mid-autumn festival,Chinese New Year,easter,ching ming festival and christmas.I like Chinese New year very much.It is because I can get pocket money, and i like watching fireworks and visiting friends. I don't like red bean cakes because it is not delicious . I like eating some sweet because it is very tasty and yummy,

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Hong Kong has many festivals. For instance, Mid-autumn Festival, Chinese New Year, Easter, Ching Ming Festival, Christmas and so on. I like Chinese New Year very much. I like getting pocket money, watching fireworks and visiting friends or relatives. I don't like red bean cakes because they are not delicious but I like sweets because they are very tasty.