英文tense間題！

Yesterday my father department Che Wuyou, enters the oil my father to the service station.

昨日！我父親部車無油，我父親到油站入油。

Yeasterday!My father's car didn't have oil,my father went to the service station and enter the oil in the car.

[唔知個grama o岩唔o岩架.但係多數都o岩o既]

Yesterday, my father's car did not have oil, my father went to the oil station to add the oil.

2007-02-09 20:39:19 補充：
是gas station ,no is oil station SORRY!!!!

Yesterday! My father department Che Wuyu, enters the oil my father to the service station

My father's car ran out of fuel yesterday. He went to refill at a gas station.