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2007-02-08 8:37 am
As I have been working in HR department of this company for years, I found that the profile of some expatriate employees may not fit for the relevant post. Especially for the chief of supporting team, who responsible for managing the HR & Admin, Accounting & System Department, head office sometimes transferred a person who are solely has Sales background or accounting/audit experience..

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2007-02-08 3:24 pm
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As I have been working in HR department of this company for years, I [find] that the profile of some expatriate employees may not fit for the relevant post. Especially [for - delete] the chief of supporting team, who [is] responsible for managing the HR & Admin, Accounting & System Department. The head office sometimes [transfer] a person [who are - delete] solely [depending upon his/her] sales background or accounting/audit experience.


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