幫我解決一d英文問題!

Today, I wish to share with you about one of my favourite TV shows, Survivor. It is broadcast on ATV World Channel at 10 PM on every Saturday. It is a reality game show, with 30 people being sent to a remote place like a jungle. They are divided into tribes and will compete in some challenges. The losing tribe will vote to send one of its members away from the game. The last person standing in the game will become the winner and claim a huge cash prize.
I find the show very exciting. I have learned something new from watching the episodes, and I find it a fun way to learn to speak English. I like the show so I wish to share it with you, and hope that you'll enjoy it, too.

以上已經非常口語化, 用來做學生短講是夠了.

首先，你到底以爲翻譯的意思是什麽？“但係我唔要翻譯,要成為一個有文法ge一段野!“ 翻譯就是用另一種語言清楚地說出一個message, including 寫出 "一個有文法ge一段野"。你如果不要翻譯的話，那你要什麽呢?

還有，你連中文的文法都不正確，逗號用法不當。Hope you write better in real life.

Anyway, here is the translation:

Today I am going to talk about a television show called Survivor! It shows ever Saturday at 10 o'clock on International Channel. This show describes a journey where 30 people will arraive at a tropical rainforest, divide into several groups, and participate in some survival activities. The team that loses will have to leave, whild the team that wins stays and continues to play the game. In the end, one contestant will win and receive a great prize!

I think that this TV show is very exciting. From this show, I learned a lot of English and knowledge, and I am very glad. This is why I am sharing about this show here. Hopefully everyone will appreciate it.

2007-02-07 17:56:37 補充：
Typos:It shows every** Saturday at 10 o'clock on International Channel. This show describes a journey where 30 people will arrive** at a tropical rainforest,...The team that loses will have to leave, while** the team that wins stays and continues to play the game.

Today I can share a television program to everybody, is the survivor! It in each week 6 10. broadcast to the international radio station that, the content will be the narration has more than 30 people to be able to walk to the tropical rain forest, divides into several groups, carries on some to seek livehood game, wins group of people, is not eliminated, but loses a group, will be able some group to leave, to finally, will be able some participant to win, thus will obtain the rich bonus! I thought this program extremely stimulates, is pleasant, but I all studied have understood very many English and some knowledge, felt extremely happy, therefore I hoped introduced this program, could make everybody to feel happy