英文寫作 My favourite place

There are lots of things to

do and see in Hong Kong

My favourite place is Ocean Park

We can go to there by bus

We can surf the internet and

find the information of this place

I went to Ocean Park last october

Ocean Park opens at ten o'clock

closes at eight o'clock in the evening

I went to Ocean Park with my family

We can go to there play more game

I like Ocean Park because Ocean Park

is very fun and fantastic

I hope you will go to Ocean Park

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smooth transition.
talking about your experience.
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