英文debate..麻煩大家幫忙

Your structure of your speech should be:

The introduction---clearly state what you are debating about, what you are going to say and introduce your ideas

Example of an introduction: Good morning (teachers), adjudicator and fellow students. Today the topic that we are going to debate about is that whether smoking should be banned in the public. As being a speaker on the positive team, my team and I STRONGLY believe that smoking SHOULD be banned in the public. The reason being are...(now say your ideas) health problems, passive smoking.......

The body of your speech----This is the main part, since this is the part where you are going to be judged on. Bring up your ideas here.
DO NOT SAY---one of the idea is health problem because......if you say it like this, the judges will feel very boring.
You should say it like this---The issues of smoking have created many problems. health problems is one of the issues......
And then just bring up the ideas after you finish one. the ideas can be health problems, passive smoking, air pollution......(you should be able to think of the ideas)

Conclusion---This is another important part because this is where you end your speech. Therefore we need to make as much impact as possible.

Example of a conclusion---Summing up the ideas and themes which my team and I had raised, we arrived at the conclusion that smoking causes health problems, creates air pollution...(say your ideas). Therefore we truly believe that smoking should INDEED(say the word 'indeed' loudly) be banned in the public,(pause for half a second) thank you.

我覺得第一位答得好好,我只係想俾多個idea你

你可以special咁話由於吸煙做成好多人肺癌死去及因二手煙死去的人(好似有咁既例子架,但唔記得),最好搵下有冇資料,數據可以support就可以令到觀眾更加信服。

不過可以在第二發言時講既。

2007-02-07 06:55:51 補充：
specific, not special, typing error. sorry

I can give you some main point to help you....n you can put them into a speech....

*The enivoment is polluted already beacuse the gas from cars and smokes
*There's human right for non-smoker to have fresh air to breathe in
*non-smokers also have the right to say "no" to second-hand smoke
*Children walking on the street won't be affect
*If smoking is banned in public area, then there will be less consumer to buy smokes.

Don't know if this will help you, but hople it will la~~~ ^^