可以幫批改我的英文日記嗎?(好短)

日記...就應該用past tense
School day
I had some homework trouble with my teacher today. She decided to leave me with a bad record. Someone had my homework with him/her and he'she didn't go to school today so I had no homework to hand in. I'm not satisfied with my school results this year. I'm afraid that I have reached the limit of my ability. However, I shall not give up! I'll keep working hard so as to improve my grades.
你原文有d意思我唔係好肯定, 我自己有少少估估下.
有意見可通知我, 我再修改

2007-02-04 01:20:18 補充：
發生左的事用past tense, 講自己感受就用番present tense

school day
I have some trouble of my homework by teacher.
she had determined to add a bad record for me.
Somebody who get mt homework stay at home.
I don't more content of the result this year.
I was worry because it may be the limit myself.
However,no gaveup!!

school day
學校天

I have some trouble of my homework by teacher.
我有教師的我的家庭作業的一些麻煩。

She had determined to add a bad record for me.
她已經確定為我增加一個壞記錄。

Someone who get my homework stay at home.
得到我的家庭作業的人呆在家裡。

I don ' t more content of the result this year.
我指導老師' t 結果今年的更多滿足。

I was worry because it may be the limit myselt.
我是擔心，因為它可能是限制myselt。

However , no gaveup!!
不過，沒有gaveup﹗ !