幫我作文plx~~~~20分

once a pone a time. i have a dream . i think that i go to hong kong trip. i go to the the ocean park there is a lot of game . my favourite game is a roller coaster. this game is very exciting. after i had played the roller coaster, i go to the other game this is not exciting but it is very interesting. we need to match the two cards togethng then we can have a free ice cream. when there is five p.m we need to leave the park as the same time my mum is called me. Mum said "week up . boy you need to week up."

2007-02-03 10:04:17 補充：
20分

2007-02-03 10:07:15 補充：
if u use it give some commend

2007-02-03 10:15:07 補充：
the down is copy from me

我隨便的(惡夢)

I had a nightmare(惡夢)last night. In my dream, Iwas in the church. A few minutes later, the door openedbut there was no people inside.
Suddenly, I saw something.‘ Is it ghost? ’ I was very afraid.I ranvery fast but the ghost ran after me.I didn't know where I went‘ Oh no! I am in a cemetery(墳場)’I said. The ghost said ‘ I want to eat you! Don't run! ’ So I ran but I couldn't ran. When the ghost ate me, I heard something, ‘(你的name) ! (你的name) ! Wake up! Wake up! ’ I woke up and it was only a dream.

嘩~大佬,,,我點知yr dream係咩...點幫你作...你exam係咪都係諗住要人幫你作?