(急)中文翻譯英文...can you help me..thx~

In my opinion, I also agree the punishment suggested by the newspaper. I think it is appropriate to punish those students who frequently violate or abuse other students. If we do not imply punishments on these students they will in turn commit more serious violations on others.

Rewards and punishments only will work with those that have a normal behaviour externally, but it may not work internally in terms of moral values. However, normal rewards and punishments will help in development a student's inner moral values and hence encouraging him/her to establish a better etiquette and moral conduct.

But the most efficient method is to improve the trainning of teachers/instructors, to create a better relationship between the teachers and the students, and to reduce the administrative workloads of the teachers.
A teacher should educate his/her student based on respect, care, and encouragement in order to improve the teaching quality. On the other hand, the school and the parents should teach the students the correct moral values so that it will encourage the students or their kids to have a better moral conduct. The government can slo advertise the consequences of bullying or violence on both the victim and the suspect.

In my opinion, I agree with what the newspaper says about punishment. I think it is optimal to punish students who exercise violence and bully on other classmates; or else they will go further with their bad behaviour.

Reward and punishment can only superficially induce the right behaviour but cannot change the moral standards in ones heart. Nevertheless, reward could help students to behave well, and this helps them to distinguish what is right and what is wrong.

The most effective method, however, is through training of teachers. Closer relationship of students and teachers, relieving the work load of teachers also help.

Teachers should teach students with respect, care and encouragement, and this can enhance the learning of students. In addition, the school and parents should bring up their children in the correct way. The Government can publize the consequences of bullying.

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段中文都寫得不是太通順...段落有點不接...而家係逐句translate
anyway, 第一次做 translation :P 多多指教