English introduce myself

Good morning (or afternoon), my name is Sophie Un. I am studying at xxx University in the freshman year major with Business Administration (Not sure the exact wording, please ensure the correct one). I have worked for several part time jobs, for examples, clerk#1, sales#2, promoter#3. Now that my studying schedule is mostly at night time, I would like to have day time job like working as office clerk at the day time in order to suit my night time studys.

*******Remark,
I guess your age and your secondary school are less important on the introduction because you should have written these on your resume.

Also, I guess it will be better if you can add in more details about your working experiences (at #1, #2, #3 correspondingly). As you are looking for a clerk typed position, more details about the time you were working at the factory clerk would be helpful to let the interviewer knowing about your ability on taking this job.

For my experience, memorizing the script may not be good because the interviewer may figure it out. Therefore, I would suggest you get the most meaning and use your own style or wording to speak it out. I understand it might be difficult if your english is not tha fluent, but at least using a nice tone will also help for getting a good image from the interviewer, good luck~!

2007-02-01 13:17:50 補充：
Oh~ just missed you current job...please add it in right after your stuying:Within these months, I am working at (the name of the Casino) as a human resource clerk (please check the exact title of your current job) (and again, tell some more details on work you are currently working at.

hi!Nice to meet u. My name is Sophie un. I am 22years old, I graduated in xx Secondary School. I am learning in xxx Univerysity at night. So this years' July I found I job, convienent for night-learning, now I am working in a casinoxxx , working as a office lady/boy^^, in the past I worked as promotor, sales and factory lady