我有一個作文比賽叫my dream secondary school .我已作好了!你們可不可以俾些意見我:
my dream secondary school should have a swimming pool, singing room and drawing.
why i choose these school facilities ? because i like sing a song,draw a pictuce and swimming.i like in school have a reading club,singing clubthis activities.i think i have known many friendly schoolmates and i have known kind teacher or staff.之後我就不知點作了,請俾些意見我.thank you