誠請各老師 和 高手 修改一翻 : 會考自修生懇求

Recently, our school organized an exchange programme with another school in USA. Peter was the exchanged student who came from USA to learn for two weeks. In the first day, he introduced himself to us and I could see his uniform like us. He was very kind and nice so all of my classmates like him very much though he could not speak in Chinese. It was exciting to see a blond hair classmate and I felt I was in a foreign country. Always, we talked to him about Chinese culture and he also took (?) us about himself. He was extremely interested in having Chinese foods and very curious about chopsticks. Because of this, we invited him to a Chinese restaurant to have a dinner and taught him how to use chopsticks. He was cleverer than we supposed (?). As soon as I taught him the skills, he could use it to have the dinner. We also invited him to teach us playing basketball. While he was playing basketball, he attracted many sights from students (?). In fact, he really looked like a NBA star when he hold up a basketball. We had not only learned playing basketball from him, but also we could improve our English skills during the time we were together.

When he needed to go back to USA, my class bought some gifts to him and he promised that he would come back in his free time (?).

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