我想問幾句英文文法......

你寫的那兩句是名句，網上大把網站有 QUOTE，所以不應隨便更改。你寫的其實和原文差不多，而你朋友改的反而錯。

下面是正確的：

Never abandon an old friend. You will never find one who can take his place.
Friendship is like wine, it gets better as it grows older.

不要輕易放棄舊朋友。
因你不能找別人代替他。
友情就像酒，越舊越好。

http://chickensoup.sparkyblue.com/

Never ABANDON an OLD FRiEND. You will never find one who can take his place. Friendship is like wine, it gets better as it grows older. ...
www.digitaljournal.com/article/ 96490/FiVE_SiMPLE_RuLES_TO_BE_HAPPY - 34k -

約有96項符合"Never abandon an old friend. You will never find one who can take his place."的查詢結果

Never abandon an old friend. You will never find one who can take his place. Friendship is like wine, it gets better as it grows older. No one can go back and make a brand new start. Anyone can start from now and make a brand new ending ...
forum.physorg.com/index.php?showtopic=3542 - 51k -

約有332項符合"Friendship is like wine,it gets better as it grows older"的查詢結果，

Friendship is like wine, it gets better as it grows older. ~ May GOD'S love shine upon you today ~
www.bii.a-star.edu.sg/homepage/ exstaff/dannyc/powerofprayer.html - 8k -


＞＞我fd話,改成咁樣 錯晒
Friendship is like wine. it gets better when it becomes pure!（用 pure 不對）
You can't find everyone who can replace his degree （錯晒，不應用 everyone。DEGREE 是學位，所以解不通）

2007-01-31 23:33:33 補充：
P。S。＞＞Friendship is like wine,it gets pure as it grows older！你寫呢句可改成 PURER，因後面用 OLDER。不過原文用 BETTER，咁出名，當然要用原文，但原文的 BETTER 也是用 ER 比較及，COMPARATIVE。所以你要用 PURER，文法上才是正確的。

友誼就像紅酒般,時間越長久它便越純凈!
Friendship is like wine,it gets pure as it grows older! XXX
Friendship is like the wine, it gets purer when it gets longer

從不放棄您的老朋友,您從不找到一個人能夠取代他的位置!
Never abandon an old friend. You will never find one who can take his place!X
Never abandon an old friend. Cause you will never find other one who can replace he degree!

友誼就像紅酒般,時間越長久它便越純凈!
Friendship is like wine,it gets pure as it grows older！
>Friendship is just like wine because it gets purer as it ages!

從不放棄您的老朋友,您從不找到一個人能夠取代他的位置!
Never abandon an old friend. You will never find one who can take his place！
>Never abandon an old friend as you will never find a replacement of him!
>Never abandon an old friend as you will not find anyone who can replace him!

我fd話,改成咁樣
Friendship is like wine. it gets better when it becomes pure!
>Friend is like wine as it will get better as it becomes purer!

You can't find everyone who can replace his degree
>You can't find ANYONE who can replace his importance.

我覺得第一句可以改做 it gets more pure (or 'purer' but looks a bit strange...) with time, 或者用返 as it grows older 都得, 總之個 pure 係要用比較式啦~

第二句 ok~

你個 friend 係改左你第一句的意思, 變左 '它越純淨便越好'
第二句 o黎講, 我都係覺得你自己原本 gor 句好 d~