唔該幫我汁下我篇writing丫,, thank u thank u !!!

I stayed at home all day today. I tried to revise for the upcoming HKCEE maths by practising some mc questions. However,I felt fairly frustrated because I fail to understand most of the questions which I found very difficult. Finally I gave up and turn to do other matters in order to avoid facing such failure. After a while, I repented for it when my parents,who have a great expectation to my academic performance, came to me. I knew that they would be anxious if they saw me losing my hopes. This thought gave me another drive and I urged myself to study harder !

hope this helps : )

2007-01-29 16:42:40 補充：
note:revise is the same as review. revise is a synonm of review.practicing and practising is same but in Canada/ U.S they use practicing, England they use practising.

very good la, but 點解用 "revise" ? Shouldn't it be "review" ?

revise = the act of rewriting something
review = the process of going over a subject again in study or recitation in order to fix it in the memory or summarize the facts.

"practising" is spelled wrong --> practicing
"mc" should be spelled out --> Multiple choice