(急) 有關英文問題 10分

I (your name), would like to apply the position as an office executives.

I am currently working with the (name of the comapny). I have four years working experience in retail bussiness. My major duties are order taking, customers services assist managers and general clerical duties.

你唔應該在求職信裹說你的弱點喔! (If u do so, u definately wont get the chance for an interview)

你可以一樣地寫..
I am willing to learn and work at all times.

I am looking forward to hear from you.

2007-01-26 12:26:09 補充：
should be purchasing instead of order takingsorry

Dear Sir,

Application for the post of Executive Clerk

I have learned that (your company 貴公司) is looking for (an Executive Clerk行政文員) who should have some general business experience and I would like to apply for the position.

I am currently working in xx Company for four-years solid working experience in (retail buiness 零售業). My major duties include (purchasing goods 訂購貨物), handling (retail enqueries 門市查詢) and general clerical duties. (Although I do not have the relevant experience of working as an executive clerk 雖然本人並無任何相關的經驗), I am willing to work and learn at all time.

I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.

Yours faithfully,
XXXX XXX XXXX

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(Assist my superior to handle general daily practices 協助上司處理一些日常時務)

From your advertisement, I have leart that you are looking for an Administrative Officer has had some general experience in business and I have no hesitation to offer myself as a candidate for this position.

As a (current job title) for 4 years at XX company, my job duties include purchasing, managing customers, performing effective survey and also general clerical support. I may not have the related experience for this position but I am proactive and keen to learn.

協助上司處理一些日常事務: I assist my supervisor in the office routine.

I have already learned your company is looking for an excuetive staff who has experience in business and I would like to apply for the position.

I am currently working in xx co. since 4 years ago as a (xxx Position). I have the working experience in retail business. My major duties include purchasing, helping customers, performing survey and general clerical duties. Although I do not have the experience in working some firms like yours, I am willing to work and learn at all time.

I have learned that your company is looking for an excuetive staff who has experience in business and I would like to apply for the position.

I am currently working in xx co. since 4 years ago as a (xxx Position). I have the working experience in retail business. My major duties include purchasing, helping customers, performing survey and general clerical duties. Although I do not have the experience in working some firms like yours, I am willing to work and learn at all time.

Hoping to hear from you shortly.