唔該改 grammar !!

On 29 October mornings, Hamish sent the e-mail to supplier reminding the delivery date of goods and the supplier said OK in the afternoon. When the supplier found that the tartan was not correct and the size was shortening over 40 square meters, therefore, they decided to cancel the job and the the carpet was not delivered on 2 November. However, they could not contact Hamish immediately.

2007-01-30 14:39:00 補充：
睇左中譯版, 修改如下:On 29 October... afternoon. However, suppliers did not delivery the goods to Hamish on the contracted date and he could not contact the suppliers until 2 November. Because the goods could not delivery on time, the opening ceremony was cancelled.

2007-01-30 14:39:12 補充：
Part 2At last, the goods delivered on 2 November, but the size the size was shortening over 40 square meters and the tartan was not correct.

In addition, Hamish SENT the e-mail to REMIND the date of DELIVERY TO BE 29 October morning and the supplier relied “OK” THROUGH the e-mail on 29 October afternoon. HOWEVER,t the supplier dID not have the carpet DELIVERED to the original date and Hamish COULD NOT CONTACT until the carpet FAILED to arrive on 2 November. Because OF the delay , the opening party NEEDED TO BE CANCELLED and when delivered it TURNED out to be 40 square metres short of the ordered amount and in the wrong tartan.