想問英文點寫份好既apply letter for 一d 未做過designer 工作既人去見design既工作呀 ?

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2007-01-25 6:06 pm

本人今年25歲, 現正是一位reception clerk已有年半,想成為一位WINDOW DISPLAY DESIGNER ,剛修讀完visual merchandisier課程,並且十分有意係呢行發展 ,但又未做過有關設計工作及經驗.請問應該點寫份apply letter或展現對lee行既興趣,期望面試reader 比個見工機會我呢 ?我英文唔太好,怕詞不達意.希望大家幫幫手!
我大既資料如下:
-之前都有做過sales/AM/clerk.,全都一年以上.
-軟件我只懂用AI, ..但都是在學階段 ,大部份設計我只懂用手畫出表現.
-現在的工作都有接觸到一般攝影,SAMPLE擺設showroom,我對顏色都幾敏感
-我國語良好,因現在工作都經常講多接觸國語人,但英文唔太好, 因少講及少寫, 只係可一般溝通.
PS : 希望大家用英文寫到個詳盡APPLY LETTER SAMPLE比我啦. 感激~!

更新1:

首先,感激hiskitty00 & halui0502 2位回答我問題 !感激..... 但我還有問題想補充問 , 我係呢行冇任何經驗 , 寫apply letter 一開始咁直接講我冇設計工作經驗,會唔會令到請我既人唔會再睇落去呢? 點樣可以吸引d ? 又或者我應該點鋪排個段式呢 ?

回答 (2)

kitty

2007-01-25 9:10 pm

✔ 最佳答案

Dear Sir/Madam

Re : Application for the Post of Window Display Designer

I am writing to apply for the post of Window Display Designer. I am 25 years old and as I am very interested in the field of design, I have just finished a Visual Merchandiser Course with a good mark. Although I do not have any experience in the design field, with my enthusiasm and the knowledge I have just gained, I believe I am ready to start my career permanently as a designer.

Although my past work experiences are just reception clerk and sales/AM/clerk, I am a stable person to stay on most of my jobs for over a year. My present job allows me to gain some experience in photography, sample display and showroom display. I am sensitive in colors and good in Putunghua.

I would be most grateful if you would grant me an interview. And I assure you that if I were the successful candidate, I would contribute all my efforts and enthusiasm to your company.

Yours sincerely

參考: myself, GOOD LUCK !!

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SUET HA

2007-01-26 8:12 am

我想補充以上hiskitty00
最後不應該用Yours sincerely
因為上款係Dear Sir/Madam,所以下款要Yours faithfully

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