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Oh God! I had a very exciting experience last Sunday. I was having a trip to Taiwan at that time. By the time I went to bed in the hotel, suddenly my body was shaking. And all the things in my room were shaking too! I fell on the floor as I could not take the balance. Then I heard an enormour cracking sound. So I went out and saw what had happened.

I saw the roads and the bridges were broken into two halves by the vast cracks. Suddenly, the building which was in front of me broke down! It had become rubble within 5 seconds. The terrified people screamed loudly and fled in all directions. I was dumbstruck! Unfortunately, a huge tree next to me broke down abruptly! I was almost been pressed flat. Luckily, a brave rescuer safed me and brought me to a safe place.

The transportation network was suspended for several hours in Taiwan. The government sent a rescue team to evacuate the people to a safe place from the buildings.

Now, I have just known that there was an earthquake in Taiwan. I think it was a very exciting experience! I have pace back and forth from the live and death. I think it was a very raluable experience. So I must write it in my xanga.

2007-03-01 22:30:12 補充：
should be saved= =
sorry= = careless mistake = =