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2007-01-22 2:42 am
請寫一篇文/篇文可寫的point給我:
題目:"My unluckiest day

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2007-01-23 4:31 am
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It happened in July two years ago . I graduated from the XXXX College .
One morning, I was in Causeway Bay where I lived . I was looking for a temporary job in order to get more working experience . As it was a fine day and I was in no hurry, I was taking my time looking in shop windows, strolling in the street, and sometimes just stopping and taking a look at beautiful girls around me .
It was about half past ten when it happended .When I was just walking out of the local Labour Department near Wanchai , I saw a man walking towards me with the obvious intention of talking to me . I thought he was going to ask me something . After a while, he came to me and said seriously after showing his policeman card, " I am a police officer and you are suspected of theft." At first I though it was some kind of joke . But then another policeman dressing in uniform appeared in front of me . They took me to the police station and had questioned me as to the theft case for over three hours . Eventually, I was proved to be innocent in this case and was allowed to leave the police station .
After walking for about half hour , I heard a strange voice behind me , " Freeze and take out your money!." As I was about to run away, my arm was grasped by someone . At the same time , two tall and strong men appeared very fast . ...............

Please continue to write the plot of this story !
2007-01-22 3:00 am
First:"Today is my unluckyiest day!......"
Next:"In morning,I....."
Then:"At school,I......"
Fourth:"After I back to home,I............."
Final:"when I went to bed,I...........I throght that today must be my worst day!!!!!"

PS1:Use past tense!!!!!
PS2:Don't tell me to寫一篇文 to you !! Nobody can help you forever!!!

2007-01-21 19:07:55 補充:
First Their have some word is wrong .Sorry...next Their have some word can help you''lost,unlucky....''
參考: my mind
2007-01-22 2:50 am
基本要有:
6個W(who , what , why , when , how , where)


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