高考ue作文考D以上的人, 我可以請教您們一些作文首段和未段的問題嗎?

這是一個很好的問題, 反映你對自己有了反省.

其實我個人覺得要作文作得得體一點, 一定要少用 副詞 又或一些有組織意味的詞語 作一段的開頭. 看上去太生硬

副詞
e.g. recently, lately, currently, firstly , secondly, lastly......
有組織意味的詞語
e.g. Furthermore, Moreover, In conclusion, To sum up, In summary.......

少用一點己上詞語, 文章看上去己經好多了

要得更好, 就要做到自然, 簡單
並且加一點自己的看法, 加一點詞語, 就會好看多了.

自然就是直接說你想說的東西, 不用生硬而無用的詞句.
自己的看法使你的文章與別不同.
詞語可以修飾文章

X Nowadays, newspapers have become a part of our lives.
V Although newspapers are cheap and not durable, they have become an essential part of our lives.

因為你說你文章都是以nowadays, recently, 或lately作開啟，所以我相信你都是多寫關於時事的議論性文章。在作文時，你可以「單刀直入」，一開始便說明你想寫的是甚麼。若以月初禁煙的事情為例：

As of January 1, the Goverment has banned smoking in most enclosed areas, and I am in favour of this regulation. ...

你又或可以以個人的心得去帶領讀者去閱讀你的文章，如：

My father died of lung cancer two years ago. He did not smoke, but he frequented restaurants and bars, and became a victim of second-hand smoking. The recent enactment of the smoking ban is very welcoming sign. ...

或者，你可以用跟自己意不同的聲音去作開啟，去帶出自己的話：
Restaurant and bar owners are worried that the recent smoking ban is going to hurt their businesses. They claim that many of their patrons are smokers, and prohibiting smoking means driving these patrons away. I have a different view on this. ...

同樣地，結尾時也不一定要「旗幟鮮明」地寫著「總結」兩個字才代表你是在總結。

As illustrated in the above examples, the smoking ban is definitely bringing more benefits as a whole to the city. ...

If the smoking ban were in place ten or twenty years ago, my father could still be living today. While the past cannot be rewritten, the Government's action on the smoking ban definitely has a positive impact on the current and future generations. I hope that ...

There will always be different opinions about the smoking ban. Nonetheless, it is important that we take an impartial look at the situation and determine the best option, or sometimes, the one that is less evil. I strong believe that ...

除了以上提及過的，我也會提議你去買一份周日的南華早報，看一看副刊內面的文章是如何寫。參考他人的寫作定會對自己的寫作有幫助；或許學不到十足，至少你也有多一些靈感讓自己發揮，那樣文章就不會再是千篇一律了。