批改文章文法　題目：Shloue we use internet?

Should we use internet?

Some people might say the use of internet makes our lives easier, whereas others might disagree. Personally, I think it would be good for us in some ways.

Internet could assist us in our work. It could also help us to communicate and stay in touch with friends worldwide via using chatting and messaging tools such as icq and MSN, etc. We could also play on-line games on the internet.

However, along with the rise in broadband internet connections. People could easliy share and download warez (illeagal pirated files) such as Movies, and MP3s.

Despite these facts, internet has been a major source of information and leisure, and we should use it wisely and discreetly.

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Some people said that internet makes our lives easier while others disagree. Personally, I think internet is good for us.

Internet can assist us in our work. It can also help us to meet friends anytime like icq, MSN, etc. We can also use internet to play on-line games.

However, since internet is an international media, there are many things we cannot control. For example, internet allows people to download unlawfully like MP3, movies, etc.

Despite these facts, we should use internet with safety.