急求英文翻譯,一句商業用宣傳句子~~

2007-01-19 5:24 am
老闆突然要我為某個product翻譯一句將會印在雜誌海報o既宣傳用語
求各位幫幫手將以下中文句子翻譯成英文吧~~感激不盡!!

"凡惠顧一隻錶加以上任何一款產品,即送精美心形水晶坐枱擺設一個,送完即止!"

thx~~

回答 (8)

2007-01-19 9:51 am
✔ 最佳答案
廣告唔係要寫得悶,中英文之間唔駛100%講求意思準確和對等(當然,大概意思要整齊).通常廣告極少情況用完整句子(所謂的SVO),因為咁樣文字會太多;與其用文字堆砌文法,不如用D字0黎講件水晶有幾靚,有幾彌足珍貴.IMPERATIVE是很常見的方法:

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2007-01-19 7:12 pm
When purchase a watch together with any items listed above, you will receive a fine heart-shaped cystal ornament for FREE. While stock lasts
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2007-01-19 6:03 am
With purchase of a watch plus any one of the above product, an elegant heart-shaped crystal ornament will be offered while stock lasts.
2007-01-19 5:57 am
A dedicated heart-shaped ornament will be given to those who purchase any watch with a product above. Subject to quantity available.
2007-01-19 5:50 am
For every purchase of any time piece together with any product listed above, a heart-shape crystal desk clock will be given away while stock lasts!
2007-01-19 5:47 am
For every purchase of any product style, a elegant heart-shaped crystal table stand will be offered free for limited amount.
2007-01-19 5:41 am
When you buy a watch and one of the products listed above, you will get an elegant heart-shaped crystal ornament free, while stock lasts.

2007-01-19 00:31:43 補充:
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2007-01-19 5:28 am
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