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2007-01-19 4:54 am

I’ve become a volunteer at Po Leung Kuk, a charitable organization which provides a wide range of social services.Po Leung Kuk had an elderly centre which the place had a professional staff to take care of the old person. Also, it was had an orphanage where to let the children who hasn’t family to look after them to stay.
You may wonder why I am interested in doing voluntary work. Because they’re very poor, and I can let them feel happy, so I think why I don’t do that with them.

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I just play with them and to listen about their problem, although that just a voluntary work, it is no money to have .But I feel happier with this activity.There are other benefits of doing voluntary work.

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This activity can let us to learn communication skills, a problem-solving skills and a sense of responsibility. These benefits can make joy with the receiver, for example the orphans.

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Because pass through to these knowledge, we can to know how to get alone with others. I believe that the receiver should know our mind. I’ve gained a lot through being a volunteer.

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Ever since I joined this voluntary work, I feel myself be happier. Maybe when I to contact the poor person, I can made them had joy. This feeling is cannot use one word to describe, it was very happy .so I think if you join this activity with me, you must know my feeling .Hope you to think over!

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2007-01-19 6:24 am

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1st paragraph:
I am a volunteer of Po Leung Kuk, a charitable organization which provides a wide range of social services.An elderly centre is built by the organization, where the old people are looked after by some well-trained staff. (We don't use 'professional' here) There is also an orphanage where children who do not have a home can stay.

2nd paragraph:
You may wonder why I am interested in voluteering work. Since there are always a group of people which is often ignored by society and which needs our care, I think we should give them a helping hand and so as to make their lives happier. This is why I enter the field of volunteers.

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2007-01-19 7:58 pm

I’ve became a volunteer since_______ at Po Leung Kuk, a non -profit charity organization which provides a wide range of social services.

Po Leung Kuk is providing accommodation and care with continuous professional nursing and personal care for aged citizens. It is also endeavors to provide orphans and abandoned children with a stable, loving home life and education through its orphanage facilities/ programs.

As a volunteer at The Po Leung Kuk, you are offering a hand of support to someone at their greatest point of need, and that gives me a great sense of satisfaction, and joy at developing new skills, gaining work experience, making new friends, and simply having fun!

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